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Last edited by Pair; Mar 11, 2014 at 03:24 AM.
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[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...
yeah

you didnt exactly do anything
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by Tyzi View Post
yeah

you didnt exactly do anything

I dont understand
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[OSHI] [Judo Organization] [Aether] [Team AikidoBigDojo] [PSN]
[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...
kso heres a list of what you fucked up on and what you can do

what you fucked up on ~

- slow down, you're going supersonic speeds
-it's too dark and bruise and grip are on
-better transitions pls

what you can do ~

- add sync
- add screen pumps
- effects
- and just lighten it up

and please do that thing i told you to do on skype
ill die laughing
Originally Posted by Haunter View Post
kso heres a list of what you fucked up on and what you can do

what you fucked up on ~

- slow down, you're going supersonic speeds
-it's too dark and bruise and grip are on
-better transitions pls

what you can do ~

- add sync
- add screen pumps
- effects
- and just lighten it up

and please do that thing i told you to do on skype
ill die laughing

Why are people saying theres no sync? I see sync.
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[OSHI] [Judo Organization] [Aether] [Team AikidoBigDojo] [PSN]
[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...
Originally Posted by Tyzi View Post
yeah

you didnt exactly do anything

What she's saying is there isn't really much to this video. There's no main exciting point and ending, it kinda seems unfinished or that it has no direction.

I see the sync tho.
I noticed the sync ,but don't understand why do people say that there's no the sync? My tip is: add more effects) essentially, good job!
Originally Posted by Pair View Post
WIP, RSMB IN FUTURE, CNC PLS

It is unfinished
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Originally Posted by Moonshake View Post
Next time choose a song that isn't a massacre of the English language

I admit, the guy who made the song is very retarted. But, I hear his songs all the time around where I live and I like the beat to this one.
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Originally Posted by 2nel View Post
I noticed the sync ,but don't understand why do people say that there's no the sync? My tip is: add more effects) essentially, good job!

Thank you!
Last edited by Pair; Mar 6, 2014 at 07:01 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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[OSHI] [Judo Organization] [Aether] [Team AikidoBigDojo] [PSN]
[3:50:35 PM] Sam: I'm a lyrical, cynical, rythmical demon.
Spittin out lines like I spit out hot semen.....
Taking a break...
Shitposts deleted.
infractions/warnings given where necessary.
further useless/shit posts will be deleted and punished accordingly.
stop being assholes.

Vid was ok, seems a bit standard, i think tyzi just expected more from you.
i like your camera angles, but one or two of the earlier clips in the vid were a bit tough to follow though, you got a bit too close.
Last edited by BenDover; Mar 6, 2014 at 10:25 AM.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
I don't like the shader, at all. the bright light is kind of annoying, and it doesn't mix well with the blackish green. If you insist on using a 420 blaze it theme, use a lighter green pl0x.

also I didn't notice the sync.
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