Fixed them for you.

Actually, imo you over effected it.

The first one was just like ":|" because you might of twitched 3 times for the frame, and the speed of the music didn't fit with the replays. Its like watching a grandma move to slipknot.

and before i looked at the 2nd one i was like "oh yes! i lets see how he is at normal"
And i was really disappointed at the continues background, it was horrible.

1st: 6/10

2nd: 3/10

May i add, Your first video intro was awesome :>

thnx

yup ur first one was awesome.

For both, some aspects of the video were very professional, but you do something bad during it to screw it up. CBB elaborating atm.

1st one:a little rutzor-ish(i don't know if anyone remeber his vids cuz i just came to tb)
2nd one:i didn't like it at all.

You're very technically proficient in Vegas, but you need to learn speed and syncing. Great replays help a lot, and most of those weren't great.

4/10

Thanks all! I will necessarily consider your comments

1st: had a lot of skips, it wasnt smoothly done
2nd: moving the camera around with a static background is really bad. things just look like they're flying everywhere, rather having a fixed frame of reference