alright so here it is again, probably won't be as good as the first time but I did try honest.
first things first, pretty nice opener, it was a tad bit slow but it does look pretty rad.
The transition to the first kick was handled really well, but it wasn't original at all. I feel like you were being too "safe", and it looked kinda bland even if you did execute it really well.
Kick itself was killer, good speed, good use of the foot. Not enough followthrough for my liking so it looked a tad bit weaker than it could have, and again the transition for the second kick was lacking originality wise and you kicked with the shin which kills your momentum. The kick did its job however so thats cool too.
Skeet was ballin though, really liked it. ]
Overall its a pretty sweet replay, I feel like I've seen it before though since the whole replay feels like its "cookie-cut" from a lot of the replays these days. I don't think you are showing your style yet, and its important to break free of being generic. You want people to look at one of your replays and they will instantly know its yours, otherwise you won't get much better.
The replay was a tad bit slow at some parts, but a lot of the things you did were executed very well, its just you need to apply these things to ideas of your own. But like that skeet was pretty sweet anyways
also mb on taking this long haha