Unoriginal opener (extremerun's opener, made famous by NutHug, overused nowadays). Slow 360 spin + awkward movements while spinning. Inaccurate splitkick. Unnecessary grab. Not a boomhit. Boomhits are 3 DMs or more in one hit. That was 2 DMs.
You got the split (broken chest) with your kick and then you got the left pec and neck with the punch. A 1 DM hit, followed by a 2 DM hit. No 3 DM hits here, I'm afraid.
As for actually commenting on the replay, it was a little slow in movements and you looked like you were just waiting to land while you flew in the air. The hits weren't too bad though. Keep practising and strive to improve.