The City Is Coming Down Tonight, Be Glad You Aren’t Inside

Back to these cold endless nights,
Repeating to myself that I don’t miss you.
Were you ever really there?
Was this the best you could do?

You took hold of my steering wheel,
And threw me out of control.
Now I am lost, and left walking
Down a road that I don’t know.

Take one look at me.
See what you want to see.
I could never even be,
What you wanted me to be.

I gave in for you.
I didn’t even fight.
My inner walls are broken.
Honey, The city is coming down tonight.


A poem written about my ex. Yeah, yeah.

Third section is random.
I like the second one, and the (reverse?)personifications.
First section; line 3/4 are sketchy.

:/ Meh...pretty nice i has to say !

That poem reminds me so much of a melody of a slipknot or other bands song I just dont get on the name!

Nice poetry, cant add anything to Renkai ;)

That's really nice

Did you give it to your ex?
What did she think?