Hey guys this is my first reply i've uploaded here, tell me what you think! Constructive criticism appreciated. E-N-J-O-Y

Very stiff thought the whole thing also I never like split caps (guess there done all the time or something dunno) and the splitcap was done with grabby hands. Be more fluid and less grabby and you should have this down. 5/10

Ya i actually edited it a little, right after i posted this, and had a much more fluid one. Thanks for watching!
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Try this one? A little stiff, but a much cleaner initial hit