Here is my alien head. C&C is greatly appreciated



First of a few of my heads.

What should i do on the back and top?

Should i go for a set?

It is a work in progress

...5/10 sence i's still in wip.
i dont like it at all really :|

First of all I would suggest slowing down the spin. When they go that fast it's hard to see the details. I usually set the frame delay to 222. I don't know what is considered standard here but that's what I use for all of mine.

I'm hesitant to critique because it's not done. Right now I'm not very fond of it but that does not mean that it's a bad start. All I can really say is that it needs more detail obviously on the back and top. I would suggest trying to stick with something similar to the style of the front.

I also really don't like making suggestions for what to add. It's your head and everyone has an opinion especially here it seems. When I make heads normally I am trying to create something specific. Rarely do I think it's a good idea to start with out a clear concept of what I want unless I'm just doodling out of boredom.

Honestly I would not even consider a set until a had a clear concept or a finished head. Of course just wait a little while and I'm sure there will be several people telling you what to change and add.

For now all I can say is slow it down and more detail in the blank areas.

Thanks i shaded a bit so its updated.

I think it should be the whole head and not just the face. 5/10

It looks that this head is un-finished.

Since im not a fan of animated heads.I do not like it.

4/10

Hence the Wip tag. plus Updated more
Plus:top and bottom done

EDIT: Finished