Toribash
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Guess who's back to SP.
Yeah, so after quite a long period of time I decided to make another SP replay, I've realised that I am rusty as hell, but I somehow managed to get this in five minutes.
Nothing special, but I am actually quite happy about the result.

C&C is appreciated.
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<AlphasoniK> Kristis: What the fuck is wrong with you, rainbow loving panda freak.
Seriously, try to piss standing up for a change. No life girly pants dimwit.

Opening seems pretty generic, but I like the clean boom. Would like to see some fresh replays with more happening
My heart just wouldn't be in it, you know? haven't got one.
You had the flow to do a lot more with this replay.

You should have done something with the legs after the boom hit.

The boom was clean and the opener was smooth.

8/10
Originally Posted by Lunie View Post
You had the flow to do a lot more with this replay.

You should have done something with the legs after the boom hit.

The boom was clean and the opener was smooth.

8/10

I did, I contracted legs, so I could keep balance on my arms, it wouldn't work otherwise.

Anyway, thanks for the c&c. :>
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<AlphasoniK> Kristis: What the fuck is wrong with you, rainbow loving panda freak.
Seriously, try to piss standing up for a change. No life girly pants dimwit.

Very clean, I liked it.
The split was very solid. The no grab boomhit was done from a wierd angle, but I still enjoyed it.
The pose was pretty cool c: Can't wait to see other stuff by you.
The opener was too generic, almost every replaymaker has used it at least once.
Split was good, but I didn't like the position of the left hand.
Boom was amazing, good excecution but your arms were too stiff.
Pose was really good too.
I disagree with Lunie, if you would've reached to dm the legs, it would just turn into a long replay with too much waiting. The replay's just good the way it is, simple and clean.

Originally Posted by Kristis133 View Post
I did, I contracted legs, so I could keep balance on my arms, it wouldn't work otherwise.

Anyway, thanks for the c&c. :>

He meant uke's legs.
Last edited by chamara; Nov 24, 2012 at 08:34 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump