Probably the best thing about this replay is the uniqueness. Although it was short, you didn't use the usual setup>cork>maybe something else formula that everyone else uses (myself included).
Anyway, the opener was good and simple, and the thing after reminded me a bit of a touchdown raiz but was pretty unique. The donut boy thing was awesome because most people would probably go into a cork from that setup, and it flowed surprisingly well. The movement looked good altogether. One thing I would have to say is that this had a sort of stiffness that looked good at some points, but at other times not so good. For example, when you raised your left arm in the opener it was a bit too stiff and unnatural.
That's about it.