nice start doing human faces,
Your choice of mapping is okay,
You could put the face wider, so the ears would be less visible looking from front.
it looks thin,
try to work better on the wrinkles when the muscles of the face moves,
it is a hard work to create a correct expression.
a bit of abstract face,
the eyes are much different, the eyebrows are shorter than eyes and the mouth moves unreal, It is not the worst problem to correct.
before finish it, try to detail more the whole head, it is a good first WIP.