Working on this huge drawing (full body) this is early WIP of the face. I know it looks a bit wierd now, but I will most likely spot the big obvious mistakes :P but any advice etc will be helpful.

Well the most spotable mistake is the eyes.
They are slightly bigger than they should be, it's usually 1 eye width of a distance between the 2 eyes for a human.

The eye shape itself is a common mistake, being more like an almond shape, try rounding the outer corners of her eye a bit, and think of the white of the eye as a sphere that it is when you render it, getting gradually darker as it turns away from the highlight.

And also a bit of the right side of her nose should show. You probably will fix that, just wanted to mention it.

I'm not really good at anatomy, but the eyes look a little bit far apart and the mouth a little bit wide.. Make it more narrow and a little bit smaller. Neck looks a bit weird, but it's a bit early to say anything about it...

Everything else looks rather cool to me ^^

Shoulders aren't really there, its just a blob right now.

I am working on the eyes :P

I like it so far
Fixed most of the problems
There is something about the shading under the chin I dont like.
It looks sorta weird.

yeah as I said I haven't started with the neck yet :P

Ezeth, you'll be able to point out more problems if you flip the painting,
From right to left, of course. ^^

Oh yeah I need to do this more often.