Hey, My name is Inpetus.
I'm delighted to be a part of this community and I thought I'd show off in my toribash replay making debut.
This is a tricking replay and even though I am new to this I want brutal criticism from people who know their shit. Not ratings from players who are as new as i am.
Thanks guys and again, Delighted to be here.

For how new you are I am rather impressed. If you keep up the work and try to learn from those who have done tricking or have experience in sp making replays I honestly believe you will go far. Most beginners don't know how to stand up, so keep at it.

Thanks Muun and Aiona.
I think I'll turn this into a replay thread and post more replays.
I'm glad you think I have potential.

Very good, even for me that would be decent.

Keep up with that fluid realism appearance.

I suggest you learn a flip other than a back flip, learn different spins and such.

9/10. I really liked that powerful spin at the end. The other flips are pretty standard. Almost looks like something I saw once before, I thought it was stolen at first. Hope its not, if it's yours, It is really good, it would be decent for me. (I suck though)

I would never steal a replay...

And thanks chaco, Im trying new options but I need the basics
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Listening to Chaco I opened toribash.exe today with a new goal, master at least three flips in perfect combination.
A headache and a half later I unveil to you.
Motus Mortiferum.
Please give me some feedback.