Well it is not bad for a first...
But the hair is out of form in some places.
You really don't know anime head/face proportions.
Nose was made in a strange way.
I dislike the eyes, also you've forgotten eyebows and ears...
You drew it with too low opacity brush tool.
You should find and read at least 1 "How to draw manga" volume. (I may link you via skype.)
It would really help you.
7/10 for a first...
I like the hair shading though...
Last edited by Barreta; Feb 5, 2011 at 06:16 PM.