One of my friends told me to draw her a walrus and this is what I came up with.

Made in Photoshop with the help of my tablet.

Really nice, looks great. 10/10

It doesn't look like a walrus.
It looks more like a blob with white stubs coming out of it's moustache.
The moustache does not look good, and the teeth need to be sharper. Also, you should draw the rest of the body and make it look more "wallrus-y"

Because I was obviously going for realism here.

Sarcasm isn't necessary.
If you're going for cartoony, go for cartoony.
If you're going for realism, go for realism.
Not in between.

Well if you have ever seen a walrus there is no. Much to them


I think it looks really nice

Now that's a proper gentleman. I applaud you good Sir Henry McWalrus III.
Stupidity aside that's a pretty good walrus, only problem is that the mouth seems to stretch too far to the right(our right) and i know that this isn't realism, as was stated before, but it just doesn't seem right to me. 8/10

Anyone could do that.

Looks more like a doodle rather than a proper painting.

Lacks effort.