Not really a fan of hacking replays
opener couldv'e flowed better
lift to crotch was actually quite nice
pec dm looked a bit weird, and couldv'e looked more powerful
second pec dm was bit weird as well, try to make your hits smoother instead of just raising your shoulder and lowering it
knee to get the neck dm was meh, usually not a fluid way to get dms
ground dms are much of a problem to me, but are too most people, try not to do them