This is my first headpass
Im still an amateur and this is just classic no dq headpass
Its long (5000 frames)
Watch and rate this

It's quite stiff and casual. Try being more simultaneous in your moves when headpassing. I'd also like to advice you to keep some distance, but not too much distance.

Ok
Thanks

how many times did u edit it XD

Umm,like yea...
Try to do not Grab this much and try to do it in dojo train train train

Better than i could have done.I think it is a awesome replay xD.

Umm
Over 10

Decent for a first.
I'll give it a 5/10, It's too stiff and I don't like when you keep contracting, and extending to get the right shot, instead, just edit it.

the decap and everything after was very stiff. start using more relax. i dont usually ever use hold all. its good ur opener was relax, but i think thats pretty much the only relax the whole time. i didnt think you had to grab for the decap, try to aim your momentum torward uke. only uke or tori moved at one time, thats not always a bad thing but when you do so make sure that the it still looks entertaining when theyve stopped like theyre in a pose.and that only one or two joints were moving at a time, because EVERY joint affects EVERY movement in their own certain way. but it is good that youre trying hard things.
4/10
llgr

K thanks