Hmm. It's a nice try, but I have to give some critic.
First of all, the whole thing looks really flat. Think the human in cylinders, and try to draw them in 3d. That helps a lot. Other thing is anatomy. It's really far away. Shoulders are a little too wide, waist is much too wide. Hands are different sized, and both are much too short, head is too small etc. Take this as constructive critique, I don't want to crush that pic, but it has some minor errors.
Read some anatomy, draw, draw. Remember to draw from life, that really helps. Think about the 3d shape of things when you draw them. Think where the light comes from, and where it casts shadows. The colours are more saturated in the middle parts, and less saturated in light and shadow. The background is... empty. It also has too big contrast. Human eyes see the places with most contrast.
But it isn't bad at all. Those clock parts on his chests look good. And you have drew. It's always a good thing. Remember to keep drawing, especially from life. If drawing with tablet(I suppose you have one) seems to be hard, scetch with pencil, and colour them with photoshop.
Here's a link to Andrew Loomis anatomy book. I really suggest reading it.
Here's another useful tutorial about digital painting.
I'm just trying to help you.
Edit: Flipping your image will help you with spotting errors.
Last edited by Pate5; Dec 8, 2009 at 07:04 PM.