First one kinda sucked. Twitchy weird opener, then a pretty simple snapkick-esque decap.
Second had a pretty cool flip at the beginning. The decap pretty much sucked cos it didn't flow from the inital flip. What you should've done is made Uke closer to you and contracted your glutes so you could decapkick Uke while flipping. Example replay provided (without decap, Uke too faraway).
Third had two nice flips, would've been cooler had the decap flowed more properly. Example replay provided (without decap, Uke too close).
Fourth would've been sweet if you stayed on your feet more and didn't use your arms to juggle so much. Also, if you're gonna make a skeet, throw the head UP. Skeeting a head on the floor looks shit.
Overall, quite nice and very stylish, but no brutality. We could learn a thing or two from eachover (me being quite brutal with little or no style).
EDIT: I got the decaps by changing the ED, would you like me to post them?
Last edited by DeeJayy741; Oct 12, 2009 at 02:56 AM.