Hiya!
So, i made some madman replays, and some funnyes too. First of all, i am so newbie now ( i have only brown belt) and i lookin for some tips & tricks.

i know, my replays arent the coolest, but i will happy if the legendary madmanmakers watchs it!

Replayoverflow :[

But that aside, they were pretty much... Average. None of them were actual madmans,
but the last one is damn close. It just needs some more speed, and maybe a bit
more dismemberment. The best replays of the bunch is the first and the last, IMO.
Also, in the first, loliseemyopener :o (I'm not complaining or anything)
Some tips? Well, not sure if i can offer any good tips, but i can tell you what to
work on.
Firstly, fluidity. This is generally accomplished by relaxing, try it.
Secondly, speed. A madman ain't a madman without speed!
Thirdly, power. Try to get a dismember on every strike, it looks hella good.
Fourthly, self-preservation. Avoid getting dismembered yourself while slaughtering Uke.
It is you attacking, after all =P
And finally, striking. "Uke-grating", as it has been called numerous times, which
basically means that you're grating Uke all over your own body, doesn't look
very good. Instead, try getting him out in the open, so to say, and then strike
him forcefully. Don't drag him across your body so you can hit him a little.

Overall, these score a 5/10 in my book. Not bad, but practice on the points above.
And remember, criticism is there for you to get better! :0

thank you
i will take your tips

less replays per post, like up to five. not many will bother, especially with a reliable source like shook saying they're not really that special

right i've taken your tips, and i made two replays too. Please watch it

still uke-grating and missed DM's, generally, all shook's hints still apply, none of them was completely taken yet.

especially the self preservation one

btw, I will watch all the replays from hereon that are posted in small bunches like that, but I'm not gonna take up the chore of watching all those in the beginning.

and zomfg, is uke-grating a term nowadays? holy hell, I came up with that

i think i made a really good one, there was so much practice, and editing

Hm... a little grabby, and there was a section of about a hundred frames where you didn't damage uke, but it's better.