I just want to start out. I love it, but some things that could be fixed:
The hand to me is quite annoying, I feel like that pinky is bigger than some male body parts :o No just kidding but it is a fairly big pinky...
Now some quick things that I noticed since I do have to make it quick, I noticed that the lips look funny... I don't know why but the way you did the eyes in the picture makes her look like she should be wearing lip gloss and such, which you did partly, but you never fully finished the lips. They are weird and blend in with the skin... Also... is she toothless? no harm in adding some white for teeth <3 love that lip bite ;)
Then it comes to the highlights... Highlights should be in more than one place besides the hair and the shoulder, should also be on her face and the inside hair just a little bit.
Hair needs a little more detail along the lines of inside. She has light purple here, highlights still show underneath the hair, they are hair strands, not full on curtains. Light will shine through hair and also light reflects off of objects onto other things.
The outside hair to the left should be a little better highlighted. Just scribble white in there...
Put some color on the face plox
The way that I imagine your drawing... Just know I did nothing besides the face/hair/highlights. Pinky I didn't mess with.... Also I did go a little strong on the hair highlights underneath, I was just in a rush haha, but either way, still looks good specially if you zoom out.
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Quick scribbles for the hair derp.
Last edited by Jak; Feb 20, 2015 at 10:15 PM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump