Hey, I thought you guys might've wanted to check out my replay, I find it epic myself, a bit of a bloodbath, but after a lot of editing I have got it right.

imma be all harshnuggets on you because im in that type of mood.

first thing, your opener was too simple an way too long. The random flails are rather bad. Your flow is just... meh.. You're too stiff (no.. dont take it that way.. bad person.) you could use a lot more practice my friend.. try to relax more and not be so full hold. it ends up looking a bit stiff, trust me..

opener was terrible
you dmed your knee
you got really close and that looked bad
you dmed your hand
i guess the way you let go of the hips and stuff was pretty cool
but then you dmed yourself when you could have boomed and you just dmed the hip

not bad, better than most of the people on here