That's more/less how I want to make it look like in the final version,
that's just a test but keep in mind it took me about 5 hours of work to record and edit this short thingy.
Hope you enjoyed.

Soft:
Toribash, Fraps, After Effects CS4, Sony Vegas 11 pro

o yeah, if you would like to help me, there's link to thread in my signature where you can give me replays.

Awesome. Keep up the good work

The sounds are too loud, nice effects and panning picture. Put off resample too.

i dont like the voices

The background is really stiff like you just put a sky background and moved it around (Which is probably what you did do)

I'm not sure how you would go around making it look better though.

i dont like the film burn overlay

Thanks

I left resample just because of that last slowmotion and I was too tired to use twixtor. I dont get how sounds are too loud tho.

I kinda too, I put them in just for lols really.

Sky is acttually motion tracket by using few (like 10) different clips and yeah it is stiff because it's difficult to find moving sky panorama, actually never I never tried to find it I'll see what can I do about it

What's wrong with it

7/10
I like it a lot, reminds me of Mocucha's Videos. However, the voices are a bit weird. Good Camera work.

-edit-
you should flash colours when it's the right time, the blue flash that goes just after the build up kick doesn't work