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oh wow it looks really nice
blur a littlebit more the left shoulder (not too much, just blur it so that it doesnt look so rigid)

you could also blend a littlebit the text with the background
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thanks for the C&C. This is the solution I came up with.

That c4d you're pointing out isn't a c4d, it's just a splatter brush with a mask over it.
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whoa... i love it xD keep it up man *-*
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