hey guys just been learning how to make signatures and this is a sig i came up with

i think i kinda ruined the flow though
anyway

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Round border sucks.
And so does the dropshadow.

It's pretty obvious that that guy is there for like 5 times in the background and yah, looks a bit cluttered.

Also, looks like you didn't do anything to the actualy render, it's just on top of anything.

actully i did quite alot to the actul render

i created the entire backround using the render

i shaded the render itself more ect ect

Just a bunch of duped render copies, very poor blending and no flow at all. Just smudge and some layer-style stuff.

Also, round border and drop shadow is cheesy and unprofessional.

Looks a little too complicated.You used very few resources from the program. It looks sort of..____

ok thanks any tips on how to improve oyster?

I suggest smudging the background a bit, and smudging edges of the focal into the background to blend a little bit.

This may not be salvageable at this point though

In the left of him i see the same person who shuldn't be here try to fix it up to another background it would be nice 5/10

Make the assassin glow and not blend in with the backround. OR, you can start from scratch and make one with him blending in with the backround.

Nice, I love the close up on the sides of Ezio.
But maybe you could but a little Altiar in there?
Just a thought