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[Art]My art
I'll be posting art that I made.
Here is my first avatar I made tell me what you think.
Might upload more.
Added a edited version.

Added a re-sized one/edited some minor mistake.
Last edited by Lucy; Aug 7, 2012 at 04:19 PM.
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Originally Posted by Hypax View Post
Its ok but if i were you id work on leaving the joints there.

Just a suggestion

Originally Posted by Dothgar View Post
For standard avatars, you may want to work with a 1:1 width to height ratio, you get more work space that way

Well thanks for the suggestions/tips this is my first avatar
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I really like it. I haven't seen this kind of avatars lately.
The text is too small to be seen in the avatar size (100x100 at max unless you have toriprime and VIP)
The gradient gives a nice effect to it. I would have added the gradient to the other shoulder join also.

Overall it's a very fine piece of art. Especially for your first.
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Originally Posted by aerox21 View Post
I really like it. I haven't seen this kind of avatars lately.
The text is too small to be seen in the avatar size (100x100 at max unless you have toriprime and VIP)
The gradient gives a nice effect to it. I would have added the gradient to the other shoulder join also.

Overall it's a very fine piece of art. Especially for your first.

Thanks and i'll edit it and see how it comes out. and post the results
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Originally Posted by sicmo View Post
Added a edited version.

pfftft Splash


The gradient on the other shoulder is good. However that lighting bolt kind of thing under the eye looks as if it's crying. I don't know if it was intentional or not.
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Originally Posted by aerox21 View Post
The gradient on the other shoulder is good. However that lighting bolt kind of thing under the eye looks as if it's crying. I don't know if it was intentional or not.

Now that you say it, it does look like crying but it was mostly a crack.
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Its nice and I also like the type of colors you used. Some parts are a bit dull like the entire character is a bit just one color. The only thing I see is the shadow of red on the top left of the shoulder. However, in overall its a quite good avatar.
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