Toribash
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Aiona, otherwise known as Worth Permanent replay thread.
These replays will destroy and take your fiance.



Yes I am worth shhh
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Last edited by Ealtrik; Dec 8, 2013 at 07:47 PM.
The opener was nice, maybe slightly overdone.

The kicks were great and smooth, but try to avoid kicking with a contracted ankle.

The skeet was thrown awkwardly and you didn't really finish with a pose.

It's a step up from your other replays, well done. 7/10.
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8/10 Each of the hits were well aimed but you were quick to contract your knee after the first kick,
the second kick impacted nicely but the punch really did not seem to follow it up well.
Aside from these and stiffness of your arms in the beginning I thought the replay went pretty well.
To busy being dead to be active.

Dramels Thoughts

9/10
I like your movement and style, but I didn't enjoy that foot dm. :P
Also, your shoulders were a little stiff during the opener.
Who in the hell would kill such a beautiful angel?

jk.. jk

Nice booms, everything looked good but I think you should've left out the arm tearing,

And you actually posed this time, good job.

8/10
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Here is a spar I did with Cellulite, we had to cut it short because somehow he was floodkicked :<



And then the other one is what happens when im bored and cant think of a replay idea.......
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