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Extreme_Nutshot
Hello my peoples do I have a announcement for you I have just released my first ever replay reply below about your opinions and stuff.
But remember I do like constructive criticism but I do not tolerate comments where people have been drinking a ton of hatorade...
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extreme_nutshot!.rpl (21.8 KB, 27 views)
extreme_nutshot: Opener was very generic, once you got in the air you were mostly if not all the way held. Though I can understand the comical aspect of this replay, the nutkick was very weak and it wouldve been cooler if there were dms ;). The flip was wierd, you lowered your arms too early and landed on your head, and you self-grabbed at the end.
You need to work on your movement and flow. Seeing this is your first replay, it is quite good, I hope to see a lot of improvement in your next replays ;) 6.5/10
Last edited by Chilledon; Dec 31, 2013 at 11:10 PM.
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Did you set the turnframes to 50 or something?

Well congrats. Your first replay has impressed me. I seem to enjoy the small spin. But the kick seemed to be off & not aimed well. I don't like everything after the kick, but just to CnC, I'll talk about it.

Your movement doesn't include anything. You're just using your shoulders, hips & knees.

It's a good thing you tried to pose. Because like most first replays, they just use a move from the tutorial and don't bother to do anything else. Also, if you seem to be falling down, try to fix yourself instead of waiting about 70 frames. Try not to become a statue when you press space 4 times.

appreciate the effort, but I have to say 4/10
私の顔にそれを言う。
Bunch of new replays
I have some new replays that will impress.
Most dont have great endings but i was rushing.
Attached Files
flip piledriver.rpl (27.1 KB, 5 views)
flip dodge.rpl (27.3 KB, 4 views)
board escape.rpl (24.9 KB, 5 views)
BalancedKill.rpl (16.4 KB, 5 views)
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honestly its a good opener but because of your experience the replay is shit..no offence but the start of it is good but you need to use your pec lumbar abs and glutes to get more spin and flow and once you have done the main shot try to do more damage and if not do some crazy shit to end it 3.5/10

herez my version
tell me what you think?
Attached Files
GLITZ spinkick.rpl (76.7 KB, 8 views)
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This is a collection of acrobatic feats...
Thats it
It might have before seen stunts too so dont comment on that.
Attached Files
#proreal.rpl (21.9 KB, 6 views)
BalancedKill.rpl (16.4 KB, 5 views)
flying knee.rpl (35.5 KB, 7 views)
like a sir.rpl (65.5 KB, 6 views)
grace.rpl (11.0 KB, 7 views)
Last edited by ProReal; Jan 1, 2014 at 09:19 AM.
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