Toribash
Original Post
[SET/WIP]anime set
here is the WIP

head 512x512
rest 128x128
C&C appreciated
suggestions appreciated too
EDIT: two hairs
choose the best
Last edited by forsellBR; Apr 22, 2010 at 01:19 AM.
i cant see the images, try putting it on photobucket
edit:can see it now
Last edited by Tyledis; Apr 22, 2010 at 04:51 PM.
The second is soo much better,although the hair could use some work not on their edges but being other than a solid color.Mouth could be better,8/10
I see that your a newbie or something,but I'm still a harsh bitch.
Bad detail,bad shadows,shitty head with no detail.
2/10. For a try.
"Philosophy of mankind are pink dreams of a blue planet" ~Lexx
• มวยไทย •
well you just said it looks like shit...
how does that help? seems like a pretty useless comment... thats infractable you know?

how about advising him? you can be harsh without being a douche.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Well,ok,lets see.
Man,try to use some filters,at least for some layers.
Add shadows,highlights,and try to make it more creative.
"Philosophy of mankind are pink dreams of a blue planet" ~Lexx
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I actually think that the detail on the eyes is pretty nice.
Also, I prefer the hair of the first version, but try not to mirror the hair :/

Try to add some gradients on the hair and maybe on the skin.
[Addicted]
How is that a shitty head!?It beats most amine heads that are in the usual current these days,with a few improvements,this head could turn out actually good.Also why not add something to make it special btw:Tattoo anything that comes to your creative mind :P