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[WIP] Techno/beat Song
HI guys 
Recently I have got my hands on FL Studio 9. For those who have no idea what it is, is it's a music maker...
It's hard work making music, especially when all the sounds are computer generated. So without futher a do I give you my first Techno/Beat song called "Juice".
Swear and rant but this is art
.
(not a virus)
tell me what you think and rate /10
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T35WS0ZW
(If your gonna use it. tell me)
Recently I have got my hands on FL Studio 9. For those who have no idea what it is, is it's a music maker...
It's hard work making music, especially when all the sounds are computer generated. So without futher a do I give you my first Techno/Beat song called "Juice".
Swear and rant but this is art
.(not a virus)
tell me what you think and rate /10
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T35WS0ZW
(If your gonna use it. tell me)
*Meanwhile Below*
I liked the main chord...
But there are some things I want to mention that i didn't like:
1) At the beggining, The second drums were playing if it would be a fast melody, but then the melody starts and it turns out that this is a slow song.
2) The other theme at the middle of song was something absolutely different and it wasn't connected with main theme smoothly.
3) There was no culmination. You should've made it right before that silence.
4)The ending was too primitive and fast(actually, there was no ending). You should make at least an ending chord or something...
overall, this song was pretty lame... But you've got the idea. That's the most important thing
Practice more and you will be able to make some really nice songs.
P.S. I give to this song rating 4/10
But there are some things I want to mention that i didn't like:
1) At the beggining, The second drums were playing if it would be a fast melody, but then the melody starts and it turns out that this is a slow song.
2) The other theme at the middle of song was something absolutely different and it wasn't connected with main theme smoothly.
3) There was no culmination. You should've made it right before that silence.
4)The ending was too primitive and fast(actually, there was no ending). You should make at least an ending chord or something...
overall, this song was pretty lame... But you've got the idea. That's the most important thing
Practice more and you will be able to make some really nice songs.
P.S. I give to this song rating 4/10
Last edited by Arthur; Apr 25, 2010 at 04:59 PM.
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