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[IMG]First human draw
hi
i made this a while ago.



its the first time i draw anything on pc.

C&C pls
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I like it, if it is supposed to be a woman (Witch i think it is) then you should make the face a little more feminine. Right now the face could pass off as a man, in my opinion. For first computer art work, i give it a 8/10.

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human draw
is it supposed to be manga or not?

i very much like the torso.
the face is too awkward

7/10
My deviantART
so wut?
yeah it shuld be a manga. (i think tha face is a bit to small)
and thanks ill try to make the face better next time
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The right side of the face is what truly throws it off, its really pointy. Also try giving the mouth a little more detail.

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That's a damn sketch that you scanned not a tablet art...

Why don't you know how you made your own art?

with some elements of other stuff..

Anyway , head is horrific

The rest is nice.
Last edited by Freelancer; Jun 16, 2010 at 04:31 PM.
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