Just a new move i was trying to figure out today. Any suggestions/advice on how to make it better?

Try to be more relaxed, sometimes you are very stiff or go from stiff to lax too fast and that doesn't add to the smoothness.

Also use a better opener. That one is too basic for a point plank shot to make a good replay. Another idea would be to add more distance between you and uke to make better hits. Generally, point blank is better for madmen replays.

Ok, thanks for the advice