Please rate and tell me how it can be better

First, I can tell that you will become and epic replay maker.
Second, Try realxing more, Don't play in HOLD.

sorry ill try to be more relaxed :P

Don't be sorry, it's your first one :3

@ KenGee : Spit some more advice for him, he needs CnC.

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The only thing i can say on your replay is to relax more.

-Try making an opener with relax all.

-Learn to Balance yourself in air. E.g position your legs in air in such a way that you end up on your legs, instead of your butt or Head.

That's all.

Yea I kinda do need some more advice and what CnC?

Well, good for your first, your speed was nice. Try to look more fluid, don't let parts of your body look like sticks or be too stiff. Try relaxing more, then move on to hold/relax comboing.

I wonder if i have to get more speed and look more fluid