hmm... the replay got everything: platform, postion, mod and got everything
but the thing that I think it's bad is that you don't got the flow, you can't control your balance, I see that you touch the floor most of the time with your hand, it's just that if you don't know how to walk then best you run
if you are a beginner then get some practice, well for the record uke didn't taunt you and do some thing to make you go down, you make uke just looking at the floor and wait for you.
Rest
For a start, your opener is kinda weird. Those steps before the actual run made it weird.
Then, your tori looked like he's struggling to stay upright. The skeetcap was meh, Everything else after was kinda out of place.