In terms of the actual video, not bad for a first try. You know what sync is which is nice, even if it was a little off-time at points. The pancrop is wayyy too much though, it makes the video very hard to watch. You should also work on your camerawork, your keyframing felt really messy
In terms of the music, I've heard both of these songs very recently in videos. The small bit of the second song you played was really random and unecessary imo. It didn't flow into a second song, you just stuck a bit of another song on the end which was odd.
You have a lot of work to do but I look forward to seeing more from you
one time i had a hair deep in my urethra and when i pulled it out it felt kinda good ~fudgiebalz 2020
<~Skul> they're not children, they're demon midgets
<~Skul> if you kill one in front of the rest, they'll scatter and leave