In total, I really like the replay, and there are only a few big mistakes that stood out to me without watching it more than once, so ill tell you those then move on to smaller things
•Your steps at the very beginning of the replay don't look very good because they are not consistent.
•Your steps up the boxes at the beginning don't look as good as they could if you didn't stop on your second step ( I thought you were gonna keep that momentum)
•Whenever you go for a jump you kinda slow down and then jump. It just makes the flow of the replay feel a little off I think.
Smaller things:
•I don't like how you switched poses at the end, I thought you were gonna keep running lol.
Everything I like:
•Everything that wasn't mentioned in the statements above.
Thank you for making this, you have given me the inspiration to do my own replay on this map.