Toribash
I only saw three flaws in that video.

1. In the beginning the camera jumped around a bit.
2. Throughout the whole vid the camera moved almost too much for my liking.
3. And you forgot to put my name in the credits. LOL
League of Legends NA: Locus
Not too bad.

Critique:

* THE GAME BUTTON & POINTER D: Never let them slip into a video.
* Annoying red thingy in the bottom right of the screen.
* At times the camera darted away from the action, I know you were aiming for a fast movement but try & keep the action in view.
* The slowmo parts were jerky as hell, to combat that you need to record sections at double the FPS & apply a tiny bit of motion blur to keep it smooth.
* No music credits, credit where credit's due etc.

As I said, not too bad but with some easily avoidable annoyances. Effects weren't overused, some of the shader changes were a bit glitchy but since it can be difficult to get them 100% fluid & it's not worth picking on for that reason.

Bonus + points for recording in HD, not having crappy borders, keeping the into short etc

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So many things wrong with this.
Descript
Mouse showing in replays
Game showing in replays
Still shakey camera.
Laggy recording
OKAY replays.
Effect spam.
Barely any sync, mainly because the song is bad.
Bad shader\character transitions

2/10
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by Kyou View Post
So many things wrong with this.
Descript
Mouse showing in replays
Game showing in replays
Still shakey camera.
Laggy recording
OKAY replays.
Effect spam.
Barely any sync, mainly because the song is bad.
Bad shader\character transitions

2/10

It's all there, it's enjoyable if you're tired and don't really care about what is going on, but when you're not, Kyou basically summed it up.
I think ill stick with dont really care, Great video dude, could add some effect, but if you think its cool with it, im cool as well dude.
Originally Posted by Kyou View Post
So many things wrong with this.
Descript
Mouse showing in replays
Game showing in replays
Still shakey camera.
Laggy recording
OKAY replays.
Effect spam.
Barely any sync, mainly because the song is bad.
Bad shader\character transitions

2/10

For fuck sake What can iM do with laggy recording?
My computer is shit ..
Sync? f4ck yourself.
BAD SHADER? -.-...
and IM cant delete the descript
..
Fuck all bitch, suck my fapped dick..
Originally Posted by Kyou View Post
So many things wrong with this.
Descript
Mouse showing in replays
Game showing in replays
Still shakey camera.
Laggy recording
OKAY replays.
Effect spam.
Barely any sync, mainly because the song is bad.
Bad shader\character transitions

2/10

I agree with Kyou about everything in his post.

Originally Posted by warr332 View Post
For fuck sake What can iM do with laggy recording?
My computer is shit ..
Sync? f4ck yourself.
BAD SHADER? -.-...
and IM cant delete the descript
..


If you can't take critique, stop making videos.
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I recomend you using 60 fps (better quality)
Stop moving and moving the camera, its anoying
sync is awful
no effects
5/10

Originally Posted by Juhizz View Post
I agree with Kyou about everything in his post.




If you can't take critique, stop making videos.


Agree with those, I'd add one thing: "music" was horrible.
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