Pretty slow.
The DM's were nice.
Boom looked great.

8/10

I got 2 new replays for you guys. I don't like Harukoenshi much because of the failed torso hit :C. Other than that, I like the DM's.

The first one was alright, but the second one was pretty freakin' awsome!
9/10!
The DM's were good

Harukoenshi - Opener reminds me of Largeys one. Booms and Dm's were nice. Good Flow.
Viva Viagra - Opener was a bit stiff. Boom was great. You could got an boom on the legs but that looked nice too. Pose was good.

9/10

I did not like your chloride replay. When you use 9.82 grav, You usually make it so it is fast dms, in rapid succession. I could be too mainstream though... :s
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Oh also, you should consider where you grab uke. First of all, when you grab uke, you should grab nearer to the joints, instead of directly on the head/leg. It makes the replay more appealing in my opinion. Not sure about other people.

Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked them c:.

@keoni Not sure what you mean. I prefer fast replays. Fast causes it to be more bloodrushing. Going mainstream is just plain boring, in my opinion of course.

As for the grabbing part, I don't see how that has to do with anything... I honestly think that grabbing the torso or head is just fine. Where I grab doesn't matter much to me. It's how I do it.

Harukeonshi: First hit could've been a core or a double core but still nice. I laughed at the fail torso dm. Pose I didn't like it. You had trouble going into the pose, you twitched a lot, and the pose didn't hold. 6/10

Viva Viagra: Opener kind of took a long time. When you did that aerial drop kick it could've been a 4-5dm boom. Pose I didn't like this one. Like I said earlier you twitch a lot. The pose would've looked great if you got it to hold. 7/10

Harukoaslcejnafdcenshi- I also laughed at the torso thing. I liked the glutes kick at the end. The opener looked okay. But the first kick thing for momentum didnt look good to me. And the kick to the elbow, well, i never really liked elbow DMs. But thats just my taste. The pose was rather bad. Twitchy and it was falling. Flowed pretty well though. 7/10
Viva Viagra- The opener was a little slow. The first kick looked great. I really liked the one-two kick to the legs. But again, the pose was pretty terrible. Too twitchy. But this time it wasnt falling. 8/10

I don't understand what you guys mean at all about the twitching part... I just move a lot while I stand. I'll admit, the stance in Harukoenshi didn't hold well, neither in VV. But I think twitching would look a lot more awkward than moving slightly.

Moving when standing is okay. but try to keep it to mostly relaxing a joint and letting it fall rather than extending or whatever. We say twitching because the movements are too fast and stop too fast and seem pointless. Most people enjoy poses where you just stop moving and just stand there. It puts a nice clean ending to the replay.
Also, do you think you could swing by my thread and leave a comment on my new replay? Its my best one so far and i want a few different voices on it.