liltay... :u seems for now its not really your vocation.
Look more at tutorials on the net and put some more effort in it

"First off. I honestly don't get manga so if any of the things i say are retarded thats the reason."- If you don't understand manga why post O_o

"Anyways, his left arm is supposed to go into his hoodie pocket right? Looks like its going behind him."- I know its not perfect but its beyond repair from erasing.

The hood's proportions look wrong because his left side of it is like... wtf?- hes slightly turned
His scythe is going through him? Or is that his strap? I HAVE NO CLUE.-thats a strap to hold the scythe on his back, If you read the description you would have seen i said that O_o

His left shoe is like a stub.-Its just a sneaker.

Just, you know what. Stick to sets.- most of my sets are inspired by my drawings

This is pretty bad ._.- I know I'm badass
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liltay... :u seems for now its not really your vocation.
Look more at tutorials on the net and put some more effort in it- Thank your for your criticism, yours is always helpful.