yeah i havent touched the arms yet and about the face
'' ima work on the face a bit more''
as i said xD ill work on it
ill do a thouch up tonight, might post a wip
tomoro i will start lineing and stuff

and thanks everyone ^^
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New wip,

Much better, but ima still dislike this fat ass.

I like the new wip way better than the first
Nice sword
thanks for fixing the sword =]

New wip/update, detail above picture


Hug
''Much better, but ima still dislike this fat ass.''

-Baby got back, deal with it x3

Pyroxxx
''thanks for fixing the sword =]''

-Np, glad you like it

too small legs, imo.

she looks like a dwarf, or just very short
short arms, short legs, short body, tiny feet and a big head
you could make her look musclular without making her stocky
have a look at artgerms stuff on deviantart, see how he makes women look strong, but slender
http://artgerm.deviantart.com/gallery/

sword also looks very heavy
her right arm is also way more built than her left
and i would imagine with that pose, her back foot would be planted on the ground for balance, try the pose out yourself and see how it would be to lunge with your back heel raised like that with all your weight backwards

otherwise good work, character, shaping and pose look natural
good muscle tone
adding the dragon thing wrapping around and holding the sword was a nice touch

I don't know why but reminded me Daenerys from Game of Thrones.
Perhaps the dragon.
Looks really good, keep up the good work.

I liek dis.

Face is still flat though. :c
Seriously try drawing a 3d frame for her face because now either her head or neck is too long.
You may want to move her head back because from the way you drew it looks like she has a second neck. (Not a double chin. A double neck. Grody.)
Also this may just be a personal preference of mine but her mouth needs to stop before it gets past her pupil. Joker smile is creepy.
The sword is no longer believable anymore because the dragons hand would end up hittinq whatever she swings at hit first.

Other than all that. This is great. Crazy rockin' amazon body and stuff.

What I tried to say with my previous post, unfortunately gone now,
was that the girl had no nipples. I think adding nipples will greatly
augment its appeal to the admirers.
I realize that the message might have been a bit vague and easily
misunderstood. Either way I love the drawing, keep 'em coming!

Pretty much wanted to say the things BenDover mentioned.
If she's ment to be short/dwarf type then it's fine, if she's ment to be normal height, then the limbs are a bit short and thick, and the head is a bit big. Usually females have 7, 7.5 heads in the total height of the body ( hope you understand what I mean, can't find the proper words).

The face will look good once it's shaded, it doesn't seem that flat to me.