Wip4#
Got done lineing, added clothing on the chest etc
pretty happy with the sword ^^




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Wip3#
Fixed : Face, sword, left arm, hair


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Wip2#
So the hips wur kinda a joke, i didnt know what to do with the legs so i made them huge untill i found out what to do with em,
anyways, ima work on the face a bit more no sure what to do with it
and still, id like to add more than just her in the picture leave a post on what i should do ^^



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Wip1#

Working on another girl drawing
this time a bit more nude

not sure what to do with it though, id like to add more around her,
like defeated animals, girl, doods, wolfs!
stiff stuff like that

feel free to suggets what i should do with it^^
Wip 1#
gonna fix the right leg

Oh boy are those thighs thick.
Can't say much as it now but it's finr. (ignoring the right leg seeing as how you would said you would fix it.)

The only problem I see is the her left foot is out of perspective.
It almost looks as if it's pointing behind her which is pretty disturbing.
I'd suggest that instead of her standing flat footed on the ground have her on her toes slightly to give her a taller stature because she's so short.

Sorry but fix your link please :]

Woah, little cock! You'r sexy MRootz and your... WORK isn't.

I really like the face and the sword and the pose
but them thighs and the body is just really bad need to wrok on that

Its pretty nice so far.... just... damn those thighs are thick as crap.

Wip2#
detail above the picture

Hug
''You'r sexy MRootz''

gee thanks dude, ; )

Isolations
sorry x3 legs wasent ment to be like that, glad you took time to leave a productive comment^^

I actually liked the disfigured kind of cartoony look the first WiP gave.

But I'll critique the second one.
My main concern is the head, you seem to have body proportions down to the basics.
Only the head looks a bit weird, still. Perhaps a small change in perspective would do the trick.

The fully stretched "sword arm" also kind of annoys me because that's a really vulnerable pose.
The other arm, specifically the hand, look nice to me.

Keep it up.

No probs.

Anyways, onto the second wip.

From all I can see from the legs I like where the're going. (heh.)
But the face however is definitely not in perspective as it's reall flat.
I can tell at a glance that either you didn't make a frame for the face at all or you made a really bad one.
I do like the new look on the face though. I'd like to see it in the correct perspective if you redraw it.
She could do with a more streamlined sword as well. Or maybe just make the sword longer so the blade isn't half a wide as it is long.

Also for the background/foreground you could have her placed in a dimly lit pond or lake balancing on something extremely small or on the water.
That would be the sex.

Edit: *grunt* ninja'd on the head.
Edit again: Something like this for the sword.

I think there should be an enormous pickle
in the background with a mustache, top hat, monocle and a silvercane.
Also when you've finished drawing that please crop it out and send
it to me so I can use it as an avatar.

Chicks love a proper pickle