Toribash
Your movements are too stiff, don't just do contract/extend movements. Try making proper hits instead. Make more fluid movements. Don't just rub uke around yourself to get dismemberments.

Makes me think you don't really put much editing to your replays.
Heart of Gold
Greenmark get killled
ssssuckinator -Uke
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New one
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jklolniggass.rpl (90.0 KB, 8 views)
Last edited by GreenMark; Nov 15, 2014 at 09:07 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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ss: why use uke to make a replay? Still, this replay was better than your previous ones, but definitely not your best. Keep going, you're getting there.

jklolnig to jklolniggass: Like 'ss', better than your old ones, but keep practicing.

Overall, you got better, but you still need to get to your best
Heart of Gold
I make this for our youtube clan
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Hey more replays
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Last edited by GreenMark; Nov 19, 2014 at 02:59 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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you are evolving alot! keep it up!
just a note on the backflip: its a gainer (a backflip where you jump forwards instead of backwards)

Your Dms are better but you are not Dming enough joints. try to aim for split and decap before you go for legs and arms. it looks more proffesional. I think that one of the keys here is that you may need a goal. such as:
I want to split ukes body, then do a full 360 and kick his head off.
with other words, plan out your attacks, edit if something goes wrong, make your kicks and punches POWERFULL not just lowering dmhold and slightly nudge uke.

keep this in mind and you will probably get alot better.
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also, you sooo didnt do that ''Tricking with Uke'' replay.
dont steal replays. you wont get alot from it.
Last edited by Mack; Nov 19, 2014 at 06:52 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
Sorry about what happened with the duel before I had a lot of chores to do. Anyway you should work on your poses instead of using a lazy slump on the floor. Good DM's not smooth enough though. :/