[Criticism]
This is the wrong place to post this.But anyway,The tori did not look like it even belonged to the scene around it.Add some dodging and burning.It will make the pic more lively and the tori will look like it is really standing there.And the clouds were super-spooky.The lightning was not real looking and their was one flash of lightning only.Add some more.If you did not notice also,the tori's right leg was penetrating the grass somehow.At the time wen the other leg is above the grass.It looks kinda unrealistic.Also,the cropping itself wasn't proper.Some parts have a edgy black outline and some parts don't.You could have done much better on the overall.so i give it 7/10.
[/Criticism]
This is the wrong place to post this.But anyway,The tori did not look like it even belonged to the scene around it.Add some dodging and burning.It will make the pic more lively and the tori will look like it is really standing there.And the clouds were super-spooky.The lightning was not real looking and their was one flash of lightning only.Add some more.If you did not notice also,the tori's right leg was penetrating the grass somehow.At the time wen the other leg is above the grass.It looks kinda unrealistic.Also,the cropping itself wasn't proper.Some parts have a edgy black outline and some parts don't.You could have done much better on the overall.so i give it 7/10.
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Last edited by MYI; Jun 15, 2009 at 02:31 PM.
at least you didn't forget the tag this time :/
your skills are improving, but what's with the background?
3D with 2D components rarely works, especially in this senario. you have a bluish evening sky, but the lighting is white, doesn't make much sense.
your skills are improving, but what's with the background?
3D with 2D components rarely works, especially in this senario. you have a bluish evening sky, but the lighting is white, doesn't make much sense.
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