Ehm, it all looks like it's scribbled on with a very old pen. It really makes it look bad, the idea is nice, the effects aren't too bad, but the awkward lines make it well.. quite horrible. Oh and it's asymmetric.
Try using the pen tool for curves, atleast that makes them smooth (I don't know if you're using photoshop, but I'm just assuming you do)
Apart from that it's not that bad. Maybe try adding more details like glow and reflection, these are all matte colors and that makes it look boring.