Self Portrait.

Abstract Art.
C&C

I'll give my real .02 because I think you can take it.

Your self portrait is really flat. Just by adding a small amount of shading a preserving some highlights, and you could really bring some depth to that image. Other than that, your proportion is fairly decent, but your neck is super skinny... maybe it's that way in real life ;)

As for the abstract... well, abstract is abstract. However, if you draw to the edge of the page in all areas, it will make the piece feel more complete.

There ya go

Will do.
I hope my neck isn't that skinny in RL.

Im actully doing a self portrait in art. Its being graded ATM so i will post it when i get it back.

NICE Drawing on the portrait. Mines a little better in my oponion, But still awesome 8/10

I make like a few self portraits a day to practice my skills.
They all vary in quality depending on my additude at the effort I put in.

Do you ever use shading/Value?

To show the lighting etc., Im ganna post mine after i get it back from the teacher Its a self portrait
I had to stare in a mirror for like 5 hours. But i like the outcome

Yeah, I use shading and value.
Just not in that picture.

Kinda like the abstract.I also did abstract about 7-8 months ago

Face is to Flat as everyones said before use alot of tone. More darker area's try completely cover the drawing in pencil then pick out highlights with a rubber.

For The Abstract Tbh, I dont like it , it just looks like my english jotter; full of doodles and random shit; Abstract needs a subject to it cant just be anything although many believe it.

So Post some upgrades or other works so i can follow your progress.

Looks like you. Needs more rogue hair.