Here I will be posting many of my replays along my toribash journey, I will start with one everyday. You, being the fantastic aficionado's of toribash movement, will rate them. I would expect you to: rate, edit, and provide opinions on my replays. I do want to become a better player ofcourse ;o

u also paused alot.i find it unappealing when there is no movement in replays.it was also barely relaxed.but good for ur first madman.considering its ur first 7/10.

I see, thanks, would you mind editting it to fit your standards of constant movement?

i couldnt really pull anything off of ur opener.but what i mean is try to keep the watcher occupied to the movements more that the pauses by adding speed and dms.

Alright, maybe it's the fact that I didn't have a great enough opener... tommorow a new replay will be up though. ;-)

Here's a quick edit of the potential your opener had. The biggest flaw that I noticed was when you didn't grab Uke's head right after the arm DM. Doing this would have kept the flow going and opened you up to more possibilities. Even I couldn't have done much when you grabbed his leg, but grabbing the head, well, see for yourself:

You really helped me out there Marco. Now I know what I should do in more of my madman replays to make the much smoother.

Newest Replay (if you can make a dm in the punch at the end, I'd be grateful)

;-)

i could make dms off of the punch but i did something else.