Hey, this is one of my first videos! enjoy!



feedback please :P

I was planning on making a video with that music, I guess I'll do it anyway someday.
First off, the 'Star wars" intro is kind of boring because it doesn't have any music and it's just a pile of text (with some grammar errors). If you're new to making videos I recommend forgetting the scenario and concentrating on the following points:
-Synchronization, it's what makes your video fit with the music, regulate the speed of the clip to make the hits match the beat.
-Effects and Transitions, which also need to go with the music. Try to make them discreet and classy or complex and obvious, your choice.
-Freecam, this is important to make your camera movements fluid and original, simply follow the instructions in this thread and practice a bit, once you get the hang of it, it's pretty simple and makes your replays look a hole lot better.

You can also try adding shaders to your video. Just go to your Toribash folder, got to data/shaders and choose the name of one of the files in there, then go in-game, and type /lws [namehere].inc
if your computer isn't laggy, it should add colors to the landscape
You need to get a better recording program. The one you have is of low quality and leaves a watermark; try Fraps, it's the one I use and the best I know since it's made to record video games.

im not that stupid dude, but freecam isn't working and i didn't foud any shader matching with this theme, but thx

Then make the shader
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...hader+tutorial
And try to resolve your freecam problem, there's no comparison to a video with and without freecam.

There were spelling mistakes, the replays were poor, the replays were too long, I saw the mouse a few times whilst filming, I found it hard to read/understand the text at the beginning, plus there was little to no effects.
3/10

ok ty i will try to do all better in my next video

Also, don't use Hypercam, it sucks. Use Fraps.

Indeed, I said it already but it's a basic necessity if you want to make a vid.

but i have a problem with fraps, it only records one corner of my screen

Your comment was tl;dr


What resolution do you run Toribash at?