You seemed to have some trouble on 0:09 to 0:20. Any who, there we no good effects or material. Basically you filmed a replay, put a shitty cartoon effect over it and called it a movie. To make it better you could
1. make the replay faster
2. use more than one replay
3. music that doesn't put people to sleep
4. more effects if you have Sony Vegas
Right now it's a 0/10 for me. And if you didn't want to upload it then why did you.