this is a few replays. theyre all built off of a decap i made recently. i ended up making a technical madman with it, but my arm got torn off in the process. then theres one where i failed even more lol please watch, rate, and give tips on what i can do to make it better (preferably with more arms attached )

the first one was surprisingly good symmetry but the sloppy mess after wards makes me disappoint.4/10
same thing with sloppy boom and loss of an arm 2/10
wats the use of showing us a fail? 1/10

no use really. what do you mean by sloppy boom? sorry if i dont really know the lingo ive spent most of my time on the art forums

sloppy is when an excess of parts of tori's body is touching uke at one moment, especially ones that arent the hands or feet.(basically unnessacary contact)

ill work on it. this is my first anyways and im still a nooby blue belt