Originally Posted by
RayA75
unessecary grab to the arm at the end.
The arm grab at the end made it look like he was holding it as a trophy, I love those kind of poses.
I personally don't think it was too brief, you achieved what you wanted to do. The one gripe I have would be that the kick at the start look a bit weak and not inkeeping with the boom. I know it made Uke start falling over which is fine, but perhaps if the initial kick had been a split it would have looked more finished overall as a replay.