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[img-Tori]WIP tori-bird thing
so i decided to come out of my pit of art inactivity and do some texturing again
sofar iv only got the hands and head done, will be moving onto legs next
Im quite happy with it, but im still quite rusty...
a bit of freehand/penning and a bit of tribal flair
cant tell if the beak looks more like a beak or a carrot, not quite sure yet, lol

suppose it will be up for sale when its done

C&C and oppions are always appreciated


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It looks awesome but I don't like that at the edge of the eyehole on the mask it goes up a bit making that mask thinner in that region.
9/10
i just think that area looks odd, the thinness didnt really bother me
might work a bit there
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birdheadpfgreview.jpg i would suggest to make it like that.
gives it more expression(sorry for editing your art without permission;))
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It looks quite nice, it's clean which I like.

About the carrot/beak problem, you could add holes for nose, y'know. Birds have them.



Also something bothers me about the eyes. Maybe they could be a little bit bigger. And I don't like the expression 'i am srs bird, this is srs set', but that's opinion ;P

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yea nose holes sound like a good idea, looks a bit like one of these here :

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you edited a preview, its no biggy, i do it aswell.
i see i see joseph, and it makes sense if youre the one that made it, but i see the smiley/sad face befor i see the beak aspect. your idea is technically correct, but less obvious.
and i like to avoid going 3D on spheres. the looking at it from an angle would just look.. odd. iv already deviated from my 3D oppinion enough with the shade on the side of the beak anyway :P

though just the nose-hole idea sounds like a pretty simple fix
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Nice I like the head,is it 128x128 or more,also did you get the idea from here :P http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=163824

Are the triceps and biceps in another color that doesn't fit the set?
Keep it up.
Ben, I see you only shaded one side of the nose.
This will bring a weird look up ingame.
It will look flat, and otherwise generally weird.
It just doesn't work ingame ;)

I like the idea, and your tribals are as usual, sick.

Looking forward to see the rest.
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